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A visual novella about coming of age in a separatist society. Built with Twine and twee2.

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Give Darryl a heavier hint about going to get a game for Toe

whymog opened this issue · comments

Let's write a line or two to give Darryl more of a purpose on this barren earth.

On playing through this again today, I didn't actually feel like this was all that unclear. It did require me to connect the dots, but even just using trial-and-error here wouldn't be too challenging. In other words, I think I'm good with playtesting it as-is and seeing if people get lost.

Now that we know people can get lost here, I'd suggest adding more text in three places:

  • First encounter with Auntie (description of games in her shop)
  • Clearer hint from Darryl about games being at Auntie's Shop
  • Clearer prompt when Toe won't speak to you (maybe he's bored or he looks at an empty shelf labeled "Games" or something)

This is in #48