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Nit: poor documentation in ONVIF-Security-Service-Spec.pdf (Ver 23.06)

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  1. Pg 47

    specs/doc/Security.xml

    Line 2946 in af63a32

    <para role="param">foo env:Receiver - ter:Action - ter:MaximumNumberOfDot1XConfigurationsReached </para>

    it is not clear what "foo" means, was it supposed to be a "footnote" ?

  2. Pg 48

    specs/doc/Security.xml

    Lines 2952 to 2954 in af63a32

    <para role="param">env:Sender - ter:InvalidArgVal - ter: Dot1XMethod </para>
    <para role="text">A supplied IEEE 802.1X authentication method cannot be processed by the device.</para>
    <para role="param">env:Sender - ter:InvalidArgVal - ter: Dot1XMethodCombination </para>

    unwanted spaces after "ter: " in cosistent with all the rest of specification(s)

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It's a typo.

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is it OK if I raise Pull requests for these and similar issues ?

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Creating a PR is appreciated.

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Close as PR is available