Sections 10.8 and 10.9 (comment 28)
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Mark Nottingham commented
Sections 10.8 and 10.9: Please confirm that these
instances of "value" should not be "values".
Original:
These
include the value of settings, the manner in which flow-control
windows are managed, the way priorities are allocated to streams, the
timing of reactions to stimulus, and the handling of any features
that are controlled by settings.
...
Ensuring that processing time is not dependent on the value of
secrets is the best defense against any form of timing attack.
Possibly:
These
include the values of settings, the manner in which flow-control
windows are managed, the way priorities are allocated to streams, the
timing of reactions to stimulus, and the handling of any features
that are controlled by settings.
...
Ensuring that processing time is not dependent on secret values is
the best defense against any form of timing attack.
Cory Benfield commented
These should both be "values".
Martin Thomson commented
Values is correct in the first case, but the second should be "a value"
by which it means "any value".