Edits to Chapter 1 Maintenance and Governance first paragraph

[Jonathan Taylor]

Chapter 1

Maintenance and Governance first paragraph

"... these valuable tools often can die on the vine when if they’re not given the focus they need ..."

• Place "can" before "often"
• Remove "when" after vine

Changes would read

"... these valuable tools can often die on the when vine if they’re not given the focus they need ..."

[Brad Frost]

Wonderful, thanks @motionsuggests! The sentence now reads:

Even if time and money are allocated to establish style guides, these valuable tools often die on the vine if they're not given the focus they need to reach their true potential.

Reads much better now, thanks!