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JavaScript: How This Course Will Work: <Change sentence formation>

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In the last paragraph of the The Path section of the How this course will work lesson, the last sentence should be formatted differently.

It is currently formatted as follows:

"This is the kind of project that you’ll consider including in your portfolio as an example to demonstrate to prospective employers you have strong web development skills."

And I myself am not exactly sure what might have been meant with the last (emphasised) part of this sentence.

I think changing it into:

"This is the kind of project that you'll consider including in your portfolio to demonstrate your web-development skills to prospective employers."

or

"This is the kind of project that you'll consider including in your portfolio, as an example, to demonstrate your strong web-development skills to prospective employers."

would be a good idea. (I've only emphasised the changed parts for these examples, they wouldn't actually be emphasised)

Thank you in advance!

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Node / JS

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https://www.theodinproject.com/lessons/node-path-javascript-how-this-course-will-work

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BakedBeansOnToast

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Sounds like a good change to me, I think I lean slightly toward the first option.

Thanks!