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Poor wording

markasoftware opened this issue · comments

"As per my prediction, this outcome does not come as a surprise."

As a native English speaker, this sentence sounds very unnatural. It is a "dangling modifier" (or similar); it sounds like the prediction you made was that the outcome would not be a surprise. But in fact you're trying to say that you predicted the outcome.

Better alternatives include:

  • "This outcome does not come as a surprise."
  • "This outcome agrees with my earlier prediction."
  • "Seeing as it agrees with my earlier prediction, this outcome is not a surprise."

Thank you for sharing your insights, please feel free to send a PR by adding these in the alternativeAnswers for this statement. I'll be happy to take a look at it 😊

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