Text & Voice Issues in Ch. 5
mfdsrax2 opened this issue · comments
A period is missing on the last line.
Actually Rena laughed like 「あへへ」 "Ahehe" instead of 「あはは」 "Ahaha" here. It's upon you to decide whether to change it or not since it's not a big issue.
The voice here is very short and I didn't hear it clearly. But I'm sure it does not match the text.
I didn't finish this chapter yet. I'll keep updating.
Update
The voice here is incorrect.
The text got split on the last line.
That should be all the issues I found in Ch. 5.
Fixed except for the following two which I determined to be non-issues. Please correct me if I misunderstood.
あはは vs あへへ, the text is あはは in the PS3 game that the voice is sourced from, and I couldn't find precident for using あへへ or "ahehe" in the game script elsewhere, so leaving this one unchanged.
The last issue about text splitting doesn't seem like a problem to me. I think the English version of the text here would end up on at least 4 lines if it were forced into one box, which is undesirable.